As the sunset, jack was running weaving across the path,to escape the muscular beast that was verging upon him.
This is my stretched sentence using the 5 w's and it is not edited
As the sun set, Jack was running and weaving through the path to escape the muscular beast that was verging upon him.
This is the edited one. I used DRAFT to edit it. I did this so I can edit my writing properly. I learnt how to edit my writing using DRAFT.
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