Title: Geronimo Stilton Hero mice Mice to the rescue
Author: Elisabetta Dami
Type of book: Fiction, series book
As Geronimo and his friends made it back to the lab they finally got to relax. Proton went to the kitchen to get some cookies because they were going to watch a movie. It was going all well until there was a blackout. Everyone was worried. The screen shined and someone was on the screen. Swiftpaws said to himself this person looks familiar. Swiftpaws remembered. Swiftpaws said he is one of the most smartest and dangerous man. Geronimo asked how is he dangorous, so smart and how do you only know him. The man spoke and said if you thought Tony Sludge was dangerous you better watch out. That was it and the electricity came back on.
I think my ending was better because it goes onto the next book, we kind of have an idea of what could happen so it could go right into action. Another reason why is because whenever they save the world they always celebrate and it would be better if it was something different.
Hello Oh Hsen, I like how you have used your ending to continue with the next book in the series. I also like how you changed the ending because you said in the end they always celebrate when they save the world.
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