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Wednesday 1 November 2017

Writing Explanation

How Children Learn at School

Children are curious to know things. They learn in many different ways. If they don't know what to do they ask for help. They watch others and copy them, because learning is a big part of their lives. 

They are curious to know this because they want to be able to do it. They ask for feed-forward so that they can improve in the ares they need more improvement on. They watch their friends to learn new things. They help themselves learn by taking risks.

They learn about things that interests them. When children take risks  not only are they learning learning new things, they also get an experience of what it is like.

Children practise their skills to improve their learning. One of the things they do is ask questions and focus more. They gain knowledge from others by asking and use it to improve their skills.

Children are curious to learn things. Not all the time children know what to do so, they ask questions. They learn in many different ways. learning is a big part of their lives. They watch others and copy them.

I wrote this together with my partner Jorja. After we had finished we went to another pair and asked them to proof read it. We also asked them to give us feedback and feed-forward.

Feedback:  You have linked some paragraphs and used commas
Feed-forward: 
Make sure your sentences make sense. Put lowercase letters in the right place. 

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