Recraft boy soldier

Recraft

Boy soldier

It was 1pm in the afternoon. After a few hours Ali saw someone it looked like he was spying on Ali and his friends. It was very sunny and it was 34 degrees. Ali had a lot of friends in the army, his friends were Jordan, Danny, Cena, Adam and Andrew.

They were walking to Egypt for war and then they found a shady area where they could train. Their training was to throw grenades more accurately and they are hard to throw. They also had to work on their shooting. After a few hours of practise Ali got the hang of it  and he told the captain. The captain didn’t believe him so he came and proofed it.

His captain was proud and he told Ali he was the best soldier boy. He was told to get some water so he got a bucket and went. Ali found a waterfall and filled it with water the bucket was 1 meter tall. At the training area a lot of people were tired. The captain looked up at the sky and saw something coming down very fast. It was a bomb. BOOM!! The bomb hit the ground. Ali heard a loud sound and he was worried. He ran back to the training area and saw everybody lying on the floor. Everyone was okay but they were badly injured. They needed to fight back. All their guns were busted except for Ali’s. They needed to fight back no matter what happens.

In the middle of the fight Ali got shot on the arm but luckily it was his left not his right. Ali had been fighting for an hour and 30 minutes and he killed 18 enemy soldiers. There are now only 10 enemy soldiers left. Ali had to end it right here so he said that to all the Eygpt people. They all started shooting at him. He went to cover himself. He said sorry to all his friends because they were lying on the floor. His friends are still alive and Ali had to throw a bomb to kill all the Egypt people along with his friends. Ali thought about it and said to himself he’s going to die with his friends. He threw the bomb everybody died there was no survivor

Ten years later A man named Doranbolt and Mest went to check if there were any survivors once the made it to the training area the saw blood everywhere. Doranbolt and mest called the backup people to come with cars. When the reinforcements came Doranbolt and Mest checked if the were still breathing one person was still alive it was Ali he was famous. Everybody was dead. The reinforcements put Ali in the back of the car and went back to town.

He went to the hospital he needed waters. The doctors got a bucket of water and splashed it on Ali’s body like a wave was coming. Ali woke up and he was upset he said to the nurse that he wanted to be with his friends Doranbolt said they are all dead. Doranbolt said that there is going to be a WW4. Ali said to Doranbolt I am going to make new friends and participate in WW4 and he promised he would never let his comrades die.

First I had to plan it than craft after that I had to re-craft and now publish.

I did this so I can get better at writing a Narrative.

I learnt to use tenses.