Show not tell

Show me, don’t tell me

WALT write descriptive sentences.

Tell me sentence	Show me sentence
There was a boy called Seth.	Seth was running because he was afraid… Seth ran fast, as the wind blew in his face.
There was a boy called Rohan.	Rohan hid there in the grey tree trunk.
pIt was night time	Outside there was no light and it was very dark.
Rohan ran away from school because he got a letter.	As my feet carried me across the school grounds, my hand clutched the letter from Mr Wong.
Rohan ran as fast as he could to get away from the villains in the forest.	Rohan believed that he will make it out alive.
Once there was a boy named harald	He was running away from extraordinary Tsunami
There was boy called rohan he was running in the park.	Rohan ran in the dusty of the woods.
Once  there was a boy called Rohan	Rohan vanished the whole school.
Seth was scared to tell his grandpa happy new years	As seth ran he was nervous to tell his grandpa happy new years.

This is my show not tell. The left colum is the tell me sentence and on the right is the show me sentence. I did this because I wanted to learn how to use show me sentences more in my writing. I learnt really good show me sentences.