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Thursday, 4 June 2015

How to reference a webpage

This is how you reference a webpage. 
Banbury Shem, June 1st 2015, Arsenal win FA cup,  retrieved on June 4th 2015, from http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/blog/arsenal-win-fa-cup-2/

Wednesday, 3 June 2015

Recount Anzac biscuits

Room 9 made Anzac biscuits. First we had to choose what job we wanted to do. I was the photographer. In my group it was Rohullah’s  job was to put the biscuits on the tray. Ofa’s job was to put the flour, oats, coconut and raw sugar. There was Jericho and he was the washer. Harlem was the greaser and Joshua helped Ofa get a full cup. Sylis he was the person that stirred.

We started with some oats and the flour and some other ingredients. Then Sylis started stirring. The colour started changing it looked like an Anzac biscuit colour (brownish). After that Harlem got the tray and started greasing the tray with butter he was only allowed to grease half the tray because the other group was going to grease the other side. Once the other group finished the greasing Sylis had finished stirring.

Rohullah started to put the all the mixed ingredients on the tray. We did not have enough so the other group put their mixed ingredients on the tray. We finally finished and Mr Wong just had to put the tray in the oven. The class went to lunch. I thought we would have Anzac biscuits after lunch but we had Kiwi Can first. Once we had finished Kiwi Can we got to eat our Anzac biscuits. We all got two each but Mr Wong only got a little.

It was delicious When I took a bit of the biscuits I could feel the sugar and the oats the oats tasted like coconuts. It was one of my favourite days making Anzac biscuits.



I had to write a recount about when we made our Anzac biscuits.
I did this so I could improve on my writing.
I learnt how to write more interesting sentences.

Anzac biscuits history

Anzac biscuit history
In WW1 and WW2 most of the men ate Anzac biscuits for lunch. The people that made it were the mothers and girlfriends that made the Anzac biscuits. Maybe the sisters made it to.

People eat and make Anzac so that they can remember the  people that fought in the war. if someone had a son that went they would eat Anzac biscuits. They might like eating the Anzac biscuits.

People were  wondering what was the true origin of the Anzac biscuits nobody knows the truth. It’s a mystery someone made an Anzac biscuit then gave it to the people that went to war. Maybe that is true.

The old name for the Anzac biscuits was called soldier biscuits. Then they named it ANZAC biscuits. They named it Anzac biscuits because the ANZAC’s started eating the biscuits.


This is all the answers to the question there are more information. It has a lot of answers. The link is here.




I had to find answers the questions and write it I also had to find about the history of the Anzac biscuits.
I did this because to improve my writing.
I learnt to make sentences more interesting.

Friday, 29 May 2015

Emotive terms



This is my presentation I had to write what does emotive mean and give an example. The last step was to write a propaganda I also had to what emotive words I can find a poster. I did this because it was a task. I learnt to use emotive words.

My blog comment

I commented on Rohullah's blog.

Thursday, 28 May 2015

Monday, 25 May 2015

Recraft boy soldier

Recraft
Boy soldier

It was 1pm in the afternoon. After a few hours Ali saw someone it looked like he was spying on Ali and his friends. It was very sunny and it was 34 degrees. Ali had a lot of friends in the army, his friends were Jordan, Danny, Cena, Adam and Andrew.

They were walking to Egypt for war and then they found a shady area where they could train. Their training was to throw grenades more accurately and they are hard to throw. They also had to work on their shooting. After a few hours of practise Ali got the hang of it  and he told the captain. The captain didn’t believe him so he came and proofed it.

His captain was proud and he told Ali he was the best soldier boy. He was told to get some water so he got a bucket and went. Ali found a waterfall and filled it with water the bucket was 1 meter tall. At the training area a lot of people were tired. The captain looked up at the sky and saw something coming down very fast. It was a bomb. BOOM!! The bomb hit the ground. Ali heard a loud sound and he was worried. He ran back to the training area and saw everybody lying on the floor. Everyone was okay but they were badly injured. They needed to fight back. All their guns were busted except for Ali’s. They needed to fight back no matter what happens.
In the middle of the fight Ali got shot on the arm but luckily it was his left not his right. Ali had been fighting for an hour and 30 minutes and he killed 18 enemy soldiers. There are now only 10 enemy soldiers left. Ali had to end it right here so he said that to all the Eygpt people. They all started shooting at him. He went to cover himself. He said sorry to all his friends because they were lying on the floor. His friends are still alive and Ali had to throw a bomb to kill all the Egypt people along with his friends. Ali thought about it and said to himself he’s going to die with his friends. He threw the bomb everybody died there was no survivor


Ten years later A man named Doranbolt and Mest went to check if there were any survivors once the made it to the training area the saw blood everywhere. Doranbolt and mest called the backup people to come with cars. When the reinforcements came Doranbolt and Mest checked if the were still breathing one person was still alive it was Ali he was famous. Everybody was dead. The reinforcements put Ali in the back of the car and went back to town.

He went to the hospital he needed waters. The doctors got a bucket of water and splashed it on Ali’s body like a wave was coming. Ali woke up and he was upset he said to the nurse that he wanted to be with his friends Doranbolt said they are all dead. Doranbolt said that there is going to be a WW4. Ali said to Doranbolt I am going to make new friends and participate in WW4 and he promised he would never let his comrades die.

First I had to plan it than craft after that I had to re-craft and now publish.
I did this so I can get better at writing a Narrative.
I learnt to use tenses.