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Wednesday 6 July 2016

Story Starters: Buddy writing


Many moons ago the was an orangutan who is always treated differently. So he went out on a journey through a rainforest. He was have a peaceful time until he saw a vicious snake. He falls down and gets stuck so he calls for help but on one’s there. The snake gets closer and closer so he used all his strength to get out, He then climbs up a gigantic tree where he is safe. But the snake could climb a tree to so jumps onto another tree. The orangutan kept swinging from tree to tree, he was finally safe but he realised he was lost. So he panicked and tried to find another way out. He started running until he found his home.

For writing today we did story starters. We had to find a buddy then Mrs Anderson spun the wheel and it came up with write story about an unpopular orangutan who gets lost in the amazon. My buddy was CJ. We had to write sentence by sentence for 5 minutes, but we couldn't communicate with each other, which made it more interesting. After we had finished we had to make three powerful word changes. After that we had to find another pair, the other pair had to read out their story and we had to draw what it looks like in our head.

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